With the sun shinning high
Lighting up the edens
Like fire blazing coldly
The wind playing with dust and sand
The aroma seeping
Silently embarking a journey
It could breathe now
Breathe in the sense of freedom and security
Rejuvenating the spirit
Enlightening the soul
It stood high almost immortal
Colors of happiness embellished in every corner
A sight to witness
And hold forever
A time to never let go
All it took was a gust of wind
Throttling its spirit
The edens burnt up in smoke and ashes
Soil drenched in blood
In all the madness
Somewhere the aroma continues to linger on
Personifying life
Waiting to be resurrected
With its arms extending to embrace us
Apart from being on a Shameless self marketing spree the author is a Feature Editor (South Asia) at BEE magazine. BEE is a quarterly journal published in Britain, focusing on Asian Women. The author identified the need for a magazine that brings out the intellectual side of Asian women and accepted read *grabbed* the opportunity. A very proud member of Amnesty International Online Community where she helps gain focus for the humanitarian Crisis at hand. This is her personal space where she plans to store all her published and unpublished rants.She is also known to be very lucky with her readers which explains her presence on several other Blogs Pro-Pakistan,Global Voices
5 Comments
September 21, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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September 22, 2008 at 1:48 AM
I think you are a very intellectually gifted writer! Sachi!
September 23, 2008 at 9:00 AM
lovely!
September 27, 2008 at 9:35 AM
Ammmmmazing! I truly feel like having experienced it myself! Just beautiful!
Mind if I give a few pointers? If you think it’ll help, remove ‘continues to’ from the fourth-last line. Oh, and also ‘in the sense of’ from the eighth line. It makes it more… intense that way, IMHO.
September 27, 2008 at 9:58 AM
will definately make some changes
thank u for appreciating and for ur input