Comments on: Awaiting Revival http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/ Thu, 02 Feb 2012 21:47:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: sana saleem http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/#comment-347 Sat, 27 Sep 2008 09:58:54 +0000 http://sanasaleem.wordpress.com/?p=310#comment-347 will definately make some changes :) thank u for appreciating and for ur input

]]> By: Absar http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/#comment-346 Sat, 27 Sep 2008 09:35:21 +0000 http://sanasaleem.wordpress.com/?p=310#comment-346 Ammmmmazing! I truly feel like having experienced it myself! Just beautiful!

Mind if I give a few pointers? If you think it’ll help, remove ‘continues to’ from the fourth-last line. Oh, and also ‘in the sense of’ from the eighth line. It makes it more… intense that way, IMHO.

]]> By: saadil http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/#comment-333 Tue, 23 Sep 2008 09:00:33 +0000 http://sanasaleem.wordpress.com/?p=310#comment-333 lovely!

]]> By: Tooba http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/#comment-310 Mon, 22 Sep 2008 01:48:54 +0000 http://sanasaleem.wordpress.com/?p=310#comment-310 I think you are a very intellectually gifted writer! Sachi!

]]> By: Awaiting Revival | Tea Break http://sanasaleem.com/2008/09/21/awaiting-revival/#comment-306 Sun, 21 Sep 2008 19:21:54 +0000 http://sanasaleem.wordpress.com/?p=310#comment-306 [...] This cup of tea was served by: Mystified Justice [...]

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