Epilogue

In days and time when I can really think , I find myself  sulking for new horizons

There is hope ,solidarity and the tingling enigma of a patriot

Then comes a place in time where the  parent of enthusiasm is perpetual hope.

I see reflections staring back at tangled theologies.

The urgency within me , the craving of a breakthrough.

In  betwixt the realms of hope is the holler against negligence.

Submerging in the eloquent verity  besieged in my soul.

Hoping  against hope

Fighting against fights

Conquering back the essence lost against time

Rekindling  morality

Invoking solidarity

I walk , I walk towards the mystified horizons of justice

The world that will be different

Just

Kind

Listening to the hymns of divinity with hopes encapsulated with sadness

Bottled up anguish

Leashing out to the  obscure

Enlightening perceptions for reconciliation

And then hopes meet justice , confinement meets  liberty

Here I rise again with the memory of the thought  that shall live in me

And the one I must relinquish

Amid the cogitation I have found the purpose of my existence

Probably not the one that really is but  profoundly one I will embrace and I do .

And may death do us apart .

17 Comments

  • Waqas
    August 21, 2008 at 3:57 PM

    Proud to be Muslim, proud to be a Pakistani. Your writing is absolutely phenomenal. You choice of words and the flow of your article is amazing. Good Work

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  • anum
    September 9, 2008 at 7:18 PM

    I agree with waqas you are phenomenal !=)
    from where in this world you get these astounding ideas??=)

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  • sana saleem
    September 9, 2008 at 7:20 PM

    ahhah:) I wrote that in 10 mins or so

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  • Danish
    September 14, 2008 at 7:52 PM

    i cant believe it is a 10 min work !!! hats off … great piece of work !

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  • sana saleem
    September 14, 2008 at 7:55 PM

    Thanks danish :) .. it is 10 mins of work.. I scribbled down what I was feeling bak then and so ended up with this :)

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  • Tooba
    September 22, 2008 at 2:28 AM

    Sigh! Very touching dude.. :)

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  • Shuja
    June 18, 2009 at 12:30 PM

    Good Going Sana

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  • Majeed
    September 1, 2009 at 2:35 PM

    It’s great to discover that u write poetry, but you can write better. You can make this poem more compact, with concrete (NOT ABSTRACT) words, images & details. e.g: hope, solidarity, justice, liberty, negligence, morality are all abstract.. better to make them felt or seen thriugh images or details.
    You can also make it more compact by deleting extra or unnecessary words.
    Instead of being direct, you may be more suggestive. But you are on the right way. Write on & on..

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    • sana saleem
      September 1, 2009 at 9:28 PM

      Thankyou so much for your time and feedback. I really appreciate it. I would hardly call this poetry it was rather a ramble. Nevertheless I will surely keep your pointers in mind next time I scribble something. Thanks and welcome to my blog :)

  • Beenish Qureshi
    September 11, 2009 at 9:42 AM

    This is truly amazing, deep and thought provoking.

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  • Noreen Zehra
    September 15, 2009 at 1:43 AM

    Whoever read T.S.Eliot, will rate this as poetry! :) …am thrilled to discover that we have soulful visionaries like you in contemporary generation…am a writer myself who is delighted to encounter your genius….thanks to hira….stay in touch! :)

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  • Tazeen
    September 21, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    hi sana

    you gotta check out comments that followed yours … someone really really does not like you …

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    • sana saleem
      September 21, 2009 at 9:36 PM

      hahha tazeen, its done! the poor guy! I want to know where he blogs if he does!

  • Salman Latif
    September 23, 2009 at 11:37 PM

    Nicely done.
    It’s just hope and persistent faith that’s all we have, in the end.
    Am really glad to have come across your blog. It’d be a great place worth a daily visit for a good doze of sanity. :P

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  • sana anti pakistani
    February 3, 2010 at 11:13 PM

    Hi,
    Sana,have you ever bothered to hit out the PPP which broke pakistan in 1971,have you targeted indira for role like hitler in dividing pakistan,have you written anything about CIA/USA dictation to pakistan,their continued interference and hegemony .Are you being paid heavily by american agents to be anti pakistani.
    Im sure you are just like political leaders who get sold very cheaply to some petty leaders and agents or hired by people who are pro zionist,pro raw,and pro american.and anti pakistan.
    When you write articles do you have any shame to shun your own people,im sure you are the product of some mixed breed and a poser with scarf on.

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